Monday, July 13, 2009

All I need

All I can hide but not loneliness
All I need is to enjoy aloneness

All I am but not compassionate
All I need to do is meditate

All I can leave but not my ego
All I need is lot more love

All I can take but not right action
All I need is some direction . . .

- Vaibhav


2 comments:

Mayank Trivedi said...

Hide what? from whom? for what? and why? What are you ashamed of to hide anything?

You might be able to hide it from the world, but then somewhere you would be cheating....

You might be able to hide it from everyone else, but how would you hide from your own self, your soul and the almighty???

think through that...

But yes as a poem it sounds awesome thoughts

Vaibhav Bhandari said...

You are right that one can hide from things from the world but not from himself; his inner self.

Well, here the poet doesn't intent to hide anything. It's just a way of writing whereby the other object / word in the line gets more emphasis.